I LOVED this!
It was so very sad, but a joy to read.
The imagery and wording were great and I enjoyed the flow and rhyme scheme.
You did a wonderful job.

Great job!
The emotion on this is great. Keep writing. Take Care Cindy

Hey this was great, sad but good and quite touching!! ;)!! if your depressed you'll pull through and i no it probably doesnt seem like that cos to me it doesnt but ive been told off so mant pple that you wil get better so keep ya chin up lass and hope things turn out gd 4 ya!! :)

Well...I'll miss u. Good enough?

Haha, I know this sounds awkward but I'm running out of words to describe your poems. In fact I'm not even sure words can describe them XD
xx Roxy