That was really beautiful.
Very nicely written. 5/5

That was really well written. It was amazing. 5/5 from me.

Very well done! beautiful and amazing in everyway!

Very well done! beautiful and amazing in everyway!

Oh i love this poem, its phrased soo good. I love the way u rhyme everything .. =]]

Amaznig write
keep it up
take care
-LIsa

It seems like this girl has hurt u badly....I'm sorry, but I know wat u feel....

Awesome very deep & nicely written =)

Alryt so you're pretty good.. haha =]
just thought ya shld kno =p

Wow! that is really good.. i love it.. good sensory writing...

Great poem. This is your best i think.

Dang.
this has to be my favorite.
i love it.
<3
pure beauty!!

5/5

=]]

Yo i usally laugh at love stuff but i coudn't laugh at this, ita really good poem i love it

I love this one. Great job.

It's good

I love it. the song version is different, but they are both amazing.
i love u :)
xx