Comments : Your the one

  • 19 years ago

    by dude

    Hey i liked this poem love can be confusing thats what i got from this poem 5/5 joey

  • 19 years ago

    by ImmortalKitty

    Awesome, true emotions, sentences flow together, I would suggest only to seperate your sentences like this
    "My knees start to shake when you are in sight
    my mind is filled with wonder my heart filled with frieght" you see what i did.