Wow - that was like one of those weird dreams you have where things keep changing and not making sense but seeming so real. Good job.

Good job! I liked it alot. Keep on writing!!!!

Keep writing im loving it!!!!!

Hey shriya,,
Nice poem It#s really deep the way you described how you felt on that day!! I hope there is going to be many more poems like this one. It;s really long to!! LOL,, hruya I'm at your house right now...DONT #EMILY; me for making a long comment!! GOD! XD!! Just kidding my bezzie!! I hope to see you again soon and HAPPY B=DAY SMIRTI!! lol!! Wow,, I#m being random again uh-oh beward the fearsome emily!! llol Love you xox Emily!! XOX