Aww! i luv quails!!

I like this poem, good job!

Hey katster liking the poem it great

iv got 2 new poems on mine called "Sarcy" and "I saw you" check out 4 me plz hun

n cya in skl 2moz!!

xx courtz xx

Firstly perhaps 'MOST beautiful of all' for the last line! It needs a most..
Secondly, and should have been firstly, WOW! What an awesome poem. I agree with the nature category, but it is also amusing! They should allow joint categories on this site. Umm anyway, I liked the story it told. Almost ballad like. And the rhyme was used very effectively unlike most who use it!
Great job!

-Lenny

Well i can see that ur quiet fond of doves...
thats 2 poems i read for you with doves
great poem....a bit long...but u kept me interested....
i agree with lenny though...the last line breaks the flow u had going...
oh and thanks for the reasuring comment...im still new at this...ur comment was inspiring

Hey guys its kat.
i know the last line doesnt quite flow and ive been trying to change it but the site wont let me!
doh!
so thanks for the advice lenny!
i took your advice!

I think it's very nice, and very cute too. Imagining birds like that. haha. Great Job

Ok, changed it now...