Nice poem .
its awesome how you made every other stanza's 2&4th line ryhmed .

its most definitely unique and it has an amazing flow .

i loved it . 5/5

Simple but very deep. i like how u use earth to express emotion:)

Wow that was an interesting way to write that poem but it certainly got a point across. i liked it, it packed a punch

Once again great job...im gonna add u to my favs!!!