Comments : Spring

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Excellent job! Your words were wonderful! I could picture winter turning in to spring as I read your poem. Take Care Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by ღ Dark Princess ღ

    Beautiful!

    D_P

  • 17 years ago

    by Jason

    I love the way you capture natures mutabilty in this. A true metaphore for live. When the time is not to you liking, wait, for a new season will soon begin. Superb work.

  • 17 years ago

    by David Wallace

    U have a great amount of talent writing about our ambiance congratualtions on this ode to mother earth and hopefully we can make a change in order 2 perserve it. I gave this poem a five.

  • 17 years ago

    by Perfect Facade

    Excellant, wonderful imagery 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Bill,

    Beautiful words and a lovely scene you have painted. I love nature poems and when one as well written as this catches my eye, it makes my day. Thank you for such lovely words.

    Best regards,

    Steve

  • 17 years ago

    by Lu

    Bill you have created such wonderful images that they warm my soul on such a cold winter night.

    I love Spring for its magical beauty. It seems to pick us up right out of those blue mood days and thrust us into the arms of cheer.
    I love those first days when the weather begins to warm. Riding in the car with the windows down, smelling the fresh air....Awwww I can hardly wait.

    A wonderful read Bill and even though it is -19C tonight, I feel much warmer after reading this poetic gem.

    It seems I am about to write a book here ....lol
    Great write once again, my friend
    Take care
    Luanne

  • 16 years ago

    by hani

    Very nice and beautiful