I like to thank you Darien for giving me the chance to do this collab with you. this turned out as one of my favorite works that i've done in while, and it is because how much time you gave to it, exellent, you are a great writer and I look forword to do more poetry work with you.

Peace, Joe

Aww!!
thatz soo cute

It was unusual and I felt the rhyme and flow could have been a little less forced and choppy. The storyline is nice, and normally I LOVE your work, but I felt this lacked your normal display of emotion. (yes I know it was a collab) Still on my favs though!
Charisma*

I loved it. It was great.

A sound of something beating
My heart I give to you
Upon our first time meeting
I knew something was true

Wow! dis 1 is so touchin! keep up da gd work:)

Okay. I love the story & everything.. BUT it wasn't my favorite of yours. & I KNOW IT WAS A COLLAB. I just think that the flow & the rhythm wasn't all that great. But I still really liked it. It was really sweet & beautiful.

Bri [x]

Great poem I enjoyed this 1

Very nice poem. You and Joe did a great job. I loved it. 5/5