This is a nice poem, I really liked this one a lot....

Awwww *Tear* That last stanza Made me cry a little. *Sniff* Especially the Last line. It told alot. Especially For it Being "Just a Bike Ride". Truly Marvelous!

With Much Love,
-Ally

That was a gorgeous poem you have a real talent for writing.

Ur are apoet loved it alot it was amazing good surprise ending whoever let u go will regret it alot great job

Wow..this is really sad!

altho i get the meaning, its kinda choppy and needs help alittle with the flow.

i think the second stanza might need to be looked at, and like might need to rearrange what its sayin.....
good job
4/5
Aly

That's a lot to say,
but i really like it.
it's amazing.
<3