Very good poem. Sometimes things are not in our hands. We cant do something even after wanting to do it and thats life.... Very nicely written poem.

So sweet. There was love in that poem. Great job! (Yes, finally some new poems! hehe)
xoxo

Well written very heart felt keep writing

"I turn to the window and see the rain stop
And dry my reddened eyes as my tears drop
I don't want us be blown away just like dust
Keeping this friendship strong is an utter must"

I loved this part the most.
Excellent write.

C'est la vie (thats life)
this poem apparently came straight from the heart to the tip of ur pen
i can relate the the whole theme
loved the last stanza...=)

You put this feeling to words perfectly. The rhythem flowed out of my mouth as I read it aloud, fantastic. 5/5!