Short, sweet and to the point. I'm in full agreement with the bloke above.

Hey Sara thanks for commenting my poems! I loved this poem! 5/5 thanks

Yeah well we got in a little confortation yesterday cuz there was this girl that is like his sister but i didnit no that so i was like who the fckkk is that you know? and he did the trust thing again and well yeah i think hes still mad at me but well get over it i like him to much to let this ruin us u no

I love this. Its simple short and totally reltateable.

yes i know im going to wait im giving him one week then going to talk to him at lunch on wedsnday becuz i need to know before i leave for spring break. Im taking this week to prepare my self for the worst so i can hold it together if it doesnt work out. Im trying to be optomistic but you know sometimes u jsut have to prepare yourself.

Awesome! have fun with him! psht...its not like ya'll would watch the movie anyways! haha. i am at the wrestling show right now. they have a room full of computer and an arcade and a ton of other stuff!!! lol.

Atleast everything is going better now! i was afraid that something bad might happen...but i agree with what you said about "if you truely love me then you will forgive me" very true. i think that i am about to text wil and say goodnight and that i lvoe him but i am nervous! lol.

Yes i do have an aim sn it is kelsorocks17 but for some stupid reason my computer hasn't been letting me get on but im gonna have my step dad look at it. what is ur sn? anways. so you guys are going out again? teenage Relationships are soooo confusing. and guys can be sooo jealous. anways comment back.

I luv this girlii! 5/5 from me def.

yea ive been talkin to drew...and i actually talked to tyler today! they're both pretty kewl! they are so kewl!! they put the gravy on my rice! haha...

Small but tells all, keep up the good writing!

Of course, the greatest sport on earth: Futbol, but as we Americans know it, Soccer. When I was young I played everything, baseball, basketball, soccer, etc. But then I didn't want to play a sport or would just stop. With futbol it isn't that way and now I just love it to death. I'll add more on another poem.

Short and sweet!! Wonderfully written!! It's an awesome poem! So much emotion crammed into so little words. Great Job!! 5/5 for SURE!!

Much Love,
.:Danielle:.

Awww ..short but sweet...

nicely done..5/5