Comments : Fake Identities

  • 12 years ago

    by The lil angel

    Love the poem...sometimes i do this too lol well comment bac lol.....>3

  • 12 years ago

    by MidnightKisses

    I did that once n it never worked. i never got the dude n prolly never get him.

  • 12 years ago

    by xo kisses xo

    Wow! that is so true! people do this all the time!!! i love it! you have such amazing and true poems! 5/5

    xoxo becca

  • 12 years ago

    by Mandy

    Woo! i luv it! its so true!! i agree w/ her ^^^ xoxokissesxoxo!^^^ you awesome!! so wht state do you live in?

  • 12 years ago

    by xPerfect Chaosx

    Wow.. wonderful!! It's so relateable to!!! So emotional.. it's great!! And thank you for the comment!!! 5/5

    Much Love,
    .:Danielle:.

  • 12 years ago

    by invisible shadow

    OMG!! Awsome poem! My best friend is doing the same thing for a guy and I see her changing into something she is not and it really suxx... I just want her to be to her normal self... Anywas, great poem, continue the nice job.. Could you comment my poems too>? Thx.xxo

  • 12 years ago

    by The lil angel

    Oh ok caz i thought it was u......

  • 12 years ago

    by 19Rusty

    Nice rhyming, and thank you I try to be that way.

  • 12 years ago

    by 19Rusty

    Gosh dang you do play a lot of sports, but that is cool.

  • 12 years ago

    by 19Rusty

    Hey I will read and talk to you later I'm going home.

  • 12 years ago

    by Chad Picard

    Wow... short, sweet, and completely true. I like it!

  • 12 years ago

    by Mandy

    Awwwww. this was really sweet. i <333 it. 5/5

    XO XO
    Mandy
    [ comment some of my new poems plz ]

  • 12 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    Haha so true lol I used to be that way in high school, dress up nice and gel the hair lol when really I should have just let everybody like me for me and nothing else. Excellent job once again 5/5 GG23 p.s. Ya'LLL did a great job on this one here

  • 11 years ago

    by Pete

    -Negatives-
    There were a couple of lines that possibly could do with a few more syllables in them.. They were just slightly shorter than either the prceding line or the one following it. Example of this
    "you look cool,
    and try to pretend that you really don't like school"

    +Positives+
    Well, for the first thing I love the title. Grabs you by the scruff of the neck and forces you to read this poem. Really powerful title - nicely chosen.
    I simply adore the story being told here .. you are/were not in this boat alone. This is synonymous with most teenagers (and some adults). We ridicule others for dressing their best to impress; then go ahead and do it ourselves.
    Apart from a couple of out of place lines, the flow of this was brilliant. It flows almost like a song. Very nice work indeed.
    By the time you have finished reading this piece, you don't want to grab your glad-rags to go out in. Just slap on some sweats, and be real!

    ~Overall~
    Very impressive piece, it's a poem that isn't just impressive to read .. but contains within the text, a valid message about life today.

    ~Pete.