Hey this was amazing, i really liked the imagery and what not. 5/5

Great job, very vivid descriptions. I liked the free-style, it was a nice change from other poems. Keep it up

Wow.. So haunting and dark.. Such intense description and amazing imagination... Great flow of words and beautiful metaphors...

To hear the sound is to die of the world's pleasantries,
and to acknowledge that you will never again be free to smile.

An amazing read... 5/5 from me..