Wow, that is... amazing
i can relate to it so well
I can't wait to read more

Very passionate. you obviously put your heart into it. i enjoyed this poem keep up the good work

This is a really cute idea and if its true then apparently someone has stolen your heart. :D and hey thats great fuel to writting poems!! :D but you need to break up your lines differently. and get into the habbit of trying to find syllables because they really help the flow.

but keep it up. um sure you'll get better. it takes time :D

good luck with it hun. i hope something sparks that thing inside that will allow poetry flow out of you with out trying.

Wow, I didnt down-vote and I am sorry, I was already having an off day and it kind of helped when you called my poems melodratmatic. It looked like you down-voted mine though, but from what you said, i believe you didnt! I am sorry!