WOW.... that was good 5/5

The last 4 lines are my favorites.
what a wonderfully penned poem.
you are a very talented writer!!! keep it up!
kat-x-

A slow start but woow I just love the ending, you saved all up all your emotion and let it come down at the end like a bomb, great work of what's to become a great poet without doubt

Great work! i loved how it kinda built off of eachother and the end was like "BAM!!!" haha i loved it! keep up the great work! :o]