Very strong poem that expresses a specific aspect of love that is not addressed often enough, although I question the relevance of the title to the actual piece. Either way, very good job!

~jas~

I like your poems.
Your a good writer.
5/5

~Chelsea

Awesome choice in words, I love the reverse action in the first line. I think a rhyme sceme would be good in this case, I dont know how you feel about it. When I read the first stanza I thought there was an ABBC R.S., but was disappointed when the following stanzas didnt follow through.

[PygmyPuff]