Comments : Praying For Another Day

  • 17 years ago

    by ben thompson

    Good write. one I'm glad you shared. keep holding on cindy. each day is a blessing.

  • 17 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Nicely done Cindy....another awesome poem!

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Very heartfelt message of hardship and love. Nice job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Barry

    Love never dies...love is.

  • 17 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Now this is what i want you to be like...strong and with a reason behind every single breath you take.
    Very inspiration and this is indeed the best one for me...thnx for sharing it

    all the best and take care

  • 17 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    This was a great poem and so heartfelt. Love and family is what keeps us going.
    Great job.

  • 17 years ago

    by [[Get Ya Wicked On]]

    I really like this, especially the second stanza. 5/5

    -T. Jane

  • 17 years ago

    by Lithium

    This poem really speaks out to me, the strength you have to go on, knowing such a loss, but yet to continue for the ones you dearly love is such an inspiration.

  • 17 years ago

    by Boy

    Very nice work welldone dear.

  • 17 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    A lovely poem Cindy, that brought tears to my eyes.
    Keep being strong,
    love your friend, Tara-Kay

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This was so beautiful and so sad at the same time.
    The last line brought tears to my eyes.
    Excellent work, as always.

  • 8 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello Cindy,

    I hope this finds you well...

    Times are always so hard
    Days stretch way to long
    This illness consumes me
    My mind is not this strong
    ^
    I can only imagine what it is like to have a long term illness. The pain, the constant hospital procedures and the knowledge of a lifetime of this. I wonder if anyone would think that they would be strong enough - somehow, I doubt it!

    Sickness almost drives me insane
    Days and nights filled with pain
    Pleasures few and far between
    Not much left for me to gain
    ^
    Oh Cindy, this really offers a flavour of the torture... 24 hours a day, with little relief and littler to enjoy. It really is enough to make one wonder 'what is the point?'

    Then I see my family
    With smiles on their faces
    Their eyes shining with love
    I couldn't be in a better place
    ^
    This is the reason, though... Family, sharing their joy and happiness. If they are smiling that is enough to go on. After all, they find happiness in knowing you are there. There to wipe their tears and hear their achievements. A reason to live.

    Watching my grandchildren grow
    My son has shared his life
    Seeing their laughter and love
    My life I will not sacrifice
    ^
    Yes, all these reasons for your life, no matter how awful to go on. Seeing your grandchildren and hearing their laughter goes along way to make up for the hardship you face each and every day. Your life is not a sprint, but a marathon to end all marathons. Keep on running Cindy and enjoying the view.

    I will hold on to this pain of mine
    Grabbing on to each new day
    Share my love with them all
    To see another day, I will pray
    ^
    This is your mantra, the belief that instils the strength that you did not know you processed. You do and because of this you will and do lead as full a life as anyone could expect and more, much more I am sure.

    Cindy, you are a trouper with the bravery to face perhaps the biggest enemy: Yourself. You have won that battle, now its just about finding the joy in others and drawing on that to fuel your inner strength and belief.

    Well done Cindy, you are an inspiration.

    Love, Michael ((hugs)) xx