This is really pretty Barry.

Barry,
Absolutely breathtaking! This poem is amazing. Your words are like a song from your heart. 5/5 Take Care Your Friend Cindy

Beautifully done Barry. A longing for love..Great job!

Excellent write barry. this piece seems to have much passion in it.

This was so incredibly beautiful.
I loved the whole thing.
Excellent. 5/5

This took my breath away, each verse, each emotion so true..
To love of such a love is never a burden, yet a gift given..
definately my favorite of them all Barry..p.s. haha I do sleep, left a comment over there...haha

Thanks for all your comments Barry.......this poem speaks to me....beautiful...on many levels... I have read it many times...a completion of sadness....

I will wait for you to come
Deep and lonely one...
I wait for you to come

Barry
I just had to tell you again how beautiful this poem is. I love reading it. Answer to your question this is one of my favorites on the site. Love too you always.........my love is forever......

Deeply honoured as this poem is
all that i have put my faith in....

Thankyou

Why Barry?

The reason is inside you

In patterned movement I know your
love.. it comes in softness from above
In your truth you will know me
forever lovers..of eternity

so beautiful.................

Estoy llorando.....para siempre

I think of you every waking hour
till my heart explodes in your flower

whta does flower mean here?? is it what i think it is lol lol anyways great job ammazing workk

Baby...this is so beautiful.....and by far the best you've ever written....

I think this poem is a bit random...like you say at one point how much u love this person then you say how lonely you are...so confusing...but is very well written, I like the randomist to it

You are the most talented man that I could ever wish to meet. My poetry is immature in comparrison. Thank you for your inspiration xxx

Very well written. I love the lines. A lot of feelings are there behind the lines. Very sweet... Good one.