Comments : The descent

  • 12 years ago

    by debbylyn

    This is really pretty Barry.

  • 12 years ago

    by Cindy

    Barry,
    Absolutely breathtaking! This poem is amazing. Your words are like a song from your heart. 5/5 Take Care Your Friend Cindy

  • 12 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Beautifully done Barry. A longing for love..Great job!

  • 12 years ago

    by ben thompson

    Excellent write barry. this piece seems to have much passion in it.

  • 12 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    This was so incredibly beautiful.
    I loved the whole thing.
    Excellent. 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Dawn Davis

    This took my breath away, each verse, each emotion so true..
    To love of such a love is never a burden, yet a gift given..
    definately my favorite of them all Barry..p.s. haha I do sleep, left a comment over there...haha

  • 12 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Thanks for all your comments Barry.......this poem speaks to me....beautiful...on many levels... I have read it many times...a completion of sadness....

    I will wait for you to come
    Deep and lonely one...
    I wait for you to come

  • 12 years ago

    by Cindy

    Barry
    I just had to tell you again how beautiful this poem is. I love reading it. Answer to your question this is one of my favorites on the site. Love too you always.........my love is forever......

  • 12 years ago

    by Barry

    Deeply honoured as this poem is
    all that i have put my faith in....

    Thankyou

  • 12 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Why Barry?

  • 12 years ago

    by Barry

    The reason is inside you

  • 12 years ago

    by debbylyn

    In patterned movement I know your
    love.. it comes in softness from above
    In your truth you will know me
    forever lovers..of eternity

    so beautiful.................

  • 12 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Estoy llorando.....para siempre

  • 12 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    I think of you every waking hour
    till my heart explodes in your flower

    whta does flower mean here?? is it what i think it is lol lol anyways great job ammazing workk

  • 12 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Baby...this is so beautiful.....and by far the best you've ever written....

  • 12 years ago

    by X Kashies Misery X

    I think this poem is a bit random...like you say at one point how much u love this person then you say how lonely you are...so confusing...but is very well written, I like the randomist to it

  • 11 years ago

    by Dionne Jones

    You are the most talented man that I could ever wish to meet. My poetry is immature in comparrison. Thank you for your inspiration xxx

  • 11 years ago

    by Sourav

    Very well written. I love the lines. A lot of feelings are there behind the lines. Very sweet... Good one.