Good poem, it had some nice imagery and reminded me of actually walking down a rode that leads to our beach.

Uhm i like the poem. the idea itself is really good. and unique. but you used the word 'adorned' and the meaning of adorned is 'to decorate or enhance' so it doesn't really make much sense to me.

but all in all its still a good poem.

I took the liberty of reading previous comments to make sure I don't repeat previous pointers. Yet, I must disagree, the "adorned" in the second stanza makes perfect sense. If the word is used to describe something that's "decorated" it therefore means the stones were "decorated" with jagged edges, that makes sense...
I liked this poem a lot. The first two stanzas were very well written and throughout the poem the flow was faultless.
I wasn't sure about the last stanza, as I couldn't make sense of the final two lines. I fear it is just me not understanding correctly, but I just can't make sense of it.
I keep thinking that on the next to final line you either meant "too journeyed" or "to journey..."
It was a great poem, just wish my brain would switch on...

Thanks for commenting on my poem/s. I really appreicate all the feedback you left me.

Hmmm. Very interesting. Not cliche at all, though it started to lean that way. But, I really like it. Great job.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex 5.5

Its a little bit bumpy but loved the whole idea... keep it up !!! 5/5

It was so smooth, and really brings memories of walking on a rocky road,
thx so so so much for the comments, they really mean alot to my poems (and me)
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Once again nicely done. Maybe you should try more rhyming in your poems. It will just give the poem a flow. But still a really good poem. God Bless 5/5

<3Tayyy

This was real good. only, I didn't see it as walking down a road. I felt like it had a more metaphorical purpose to it. but either way, it was awesome. 5/5