Comments : Trying to Catch Lightning

  • 17 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    ^^At the sign that reads jewelry and pawn
    The scapegoat but look out for the horns

    These are my favorite lines, although I loved them all. These two lines were perfect for the end. Reminds of me the jaded person, or the poor school kid who gets revenge. Knowing we should all look out for the scapegoat, the horns could kill us in the end.
    This was a great write, I could identify and paint a picture of the analogies. Wonderful Job.
    Dixie