I really like this poem, it reminds me of a poem i wrote about my mom called Fade, you should read it. anyways this is really good, and you should keep writing. shanik

Wow really good poems...kinda like i am, im sorry for everything because how ppl treat me...but you gotta stay strong keep fighting you will win in the end...always Mandz

I really love this peom its so real and it draws you into it

I really understand what you're going through. this poem is awesome and i hope that writing it helped you get your feelings out. i too am sorry to my mom for not cutting deep enough, so i know exactly what you mean. i hope things get better for you. peace.5/5
~aimee~

After reading that all i want to do is give you all the support i can and wish that i could do more