Id say this poem is about a 4/5 of course i voted 5 anyway.. i do for everybody .. :) .. it was a good write with some good word choices.. however there were some rhymes that seemed forced.. sometimes its hard to find rhyming words that fit in the poem.. the thesaurus is my best friend.. it helps A LOT!

Nice poem I most liked the line "You look in pretty bad shape like you've been hit by a dump truck"
hehehehehe... shouldn't really be laughing . Sorry.... Nice poem!!!!