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  • 17 years ago

    by Lauren

    Good poem! its sad but im in2 sad poems so...u kno.
    oh btw HI KAITLYN!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I loved this!!
    The depth and emotion in this are clear for anybody to see.
    You did an excellent job with the imagery and I loved the last two lines.
    Excellent work.