Very well penned gr8 job....5/5

God bless u

Very good job! Beautiful yet sad. I really enjoyed reading your poem. Take Care Cindy

That was awsome I loved it.

Another intense pure perfect poem
5/5
love
amy

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Damn
i know how this feels
it's not good nice choice of words though
peace

Hmm this one is again beautiful :) The repitition had a clear function and its really good. The sorrow depicted in this piece catches the attention. 5/5

Tc
Fsams

Wowow..very beautiful words u use to express ! i love it !

sana