That was so beautifully written.
Great Job.

The poem flow was excellent

=) liked this one alot..

Aww i love this poem!..its so sweet!..well done!

Awwe its so cute who ever this girl is she is lucky...good job keep it up
_forever carly_

Wow.. i'm practically speechless!!! that was an increddably awesome poem!!! well written, an i can see everything that was going on, only by readin g it! totally thrilling!!!

$erena