She desires to know who he are,
^ That didn't make much sense to me.
And,
If he care about her,
^ That should be cares.

Other than those two.
I think you did a good job. :]
The last stanza was a bit iffy.
But, it was still good.
Brought the poem together.
Honestly, without the last stanza, I'm sure ANYONE could relate to it.
Becuase, it gives no direct desire, just needing a father.
I think you did a great job.
I've yet to write of the twin towers.
I want to though.
Good Job, Hun.
I liked it. 5/5

I think you did a great job on this. Take Care Cindy