Comments : Just love me! and life will be easier

  • 18 years ago

    by *far away lover*333

    I know that it's none of my business, but I know how you feel... if it's meant to be, he'll realize what he's missing= you. I know I'm just some random stranger, but trust me when I say that it's always worth a try...because if you don't try, you'll NEVER know what could have been.

  • 18 years ago

    by A Christoffer

    Very conflicting poem. a love so great should be fought for cause it'l make it so much better. i liked the rhythm of it. u should spell check it and make it a lil better in that sense. it'll make it a better read.

  • 18 years ago

    by homebound

    Great job...i like a guy who is in my sisters grade, i am in 7th and she is a sophmore...and of course he doesnt know and it can never happen! Great job with making it flow!
    Please comment and rate my poems
    ~Peanutt