You express your emotion and thoughts well good job

This is so great... almost like a diary entry but it flows so well. i love it. well done 5/5

Wow. the way you express things is breathtaking. i hope ur not considering this. your a great poet and im sure a great person. this poem was harsh and yet at the saeme time so sorrowful it could not be harsh. i dont no. thats how i saw it. also the thing with the other poem, i no it doesnt mean much as it has already happened, but im sorry it did, i think ur a very strong person to have been able to live throught it. take care. 5/5

I would stay with you and i would die with you.