Comments : Every Boy Take My Heart

  • 12 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Again the emotion is let out well.. the strucutre is a differnt.. but i think it works.. nice job :D

  • 12 years ago

    by Kaila

    I didnt get the stanza'a order but it was good and I've been there before and I know that it sux but keep writing you have great talent

  • 12 years ago

    by blindedxxbyxxlove

    This was a very wonderful poem. You wrote it so...truthfully. I understand how this feels and you did and awesome job of putting it into words. Great job!
    ~jenifer~

  • 12 years ago

    by Zach Armitage

    V cool. i like it.

  • 12 years ago

    by xX-jess-Xx

    It was really heartfelt, the rhythm was a bit iffy at times but other than that it was lovely!
    xx

  • 12 years ago

    by Kit Kat Katie

    It was nice, but you changed from saying Me, to She quite a bit. I liked the 4 lined stanza then 2, 3 lined stanza set-up, though!

  • 12 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    This is a very good poem. I like the way you did your stanzas (4,3,3,4,3,3). It's unique. 5/5
    -vino