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by BECCA lessTHANthree
Again the emotion is let out well.. the strucutre is a differnt.. but i think it works.. nice job :D
I didnt get the stanza'a order but it was good and I've been there before and I know that it sux but keep writing you have great talent
This was a very wonderful poem. You wrote it so...truthfully. I understand how this feels and you did and awesome job of putting it into words. Great job!
by Zach Armitage
V cool. i like it.
It was really heartfelt, the rhythm was a bit iffy at times but other than that it was lovely!
by Kit Kat Katie
It was nice, but you changed from saying Me, to She quite a bit. I liked the 4 lined stanza then 2, 3 lined stanza set-up, though!
by Ike Dizzle
This is a very good poem. I like the way you did your stanzas (4,3,3,4,3,3). It's unique. 5/5