Very nice Joe once again 5/5

Very nice one again ....5/5

God bless u

Very cool, Joe. I like it. =)

~~Teres

Intersting work. I liked the ending, its true it's very sad and difficult when you love someone but they fall out of love with you. I think it's one of the hardest things in the world. It just leaves you feeling empty and you captured that with the last stanza. Nice work. Thanx for sharing this with us.

Another great one joe,
you did another amazing job here, and truly you are a great writer. keep up the great work like always cause you have a unique talent.

Sad & Beautiful.
A wonderfully written poem by an amazing writer.
You capture the readers attention at the very beginning & hold us all the way through.
You ended the poem perfectly & there were no flaws I could see throughout the whole poem.
Fantastic job, keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie Lynn

One of the worst feelings ever; loving someone and knowing they are falling out of love with you, and there is absolutely nothing you can do about it. Beautifully written. It made mt heart sad. 5/5

I felt the pain in this poems, the words you chose to express the emotions were great. Lovely work. 5/5

Emotional and well written, I enjoyed it very much

Oh, wow. So simple yet so moving. Is this from your personal experience at the moment? If so I definately know where you are coming from and how it feels as I'm there right now myself.