Ohh... very sad and disturbing.. but its the horrible truths of life.. wonderful job still.. the strucuture is good.. as well as the rhyme and flow which is flawless.. spectacular write

I am sorry for your nebior, but you are helping the world with this problem, by getting the message out there, you are doing an excellent job. This poem was well written, well pinned, the flow was a litttle off toward the end, but nothing to big to worry about. otherwise, this poem holds strong emtion, and is a very good write. Keeep up the good work 4/5

My heart goes out to your neighbour. What a horrible thing to have to endure.

"His brown eyes begin to leak." - I LOVED this line. The image created from the word "leak", as though the tears can just no longer stay in.

Beautiful work, despite its morbid topic.

This was one sad poem.
Abuse is difficult to go through.
I myself been through it.
The poem was a little shaky
with the flow. I think you should
have the closest amount of syllables
in each line. It just makes the
poem flow easier. God Bless
5/5
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