That's really sweet and beautiful Lisa.
Great job. 5/5

This is like whoa! the last line is mind blowing! it made me just smile. so much love in this poem, i commemorate you for sharing this poem with us. whoo whoo!

5/5 excellent. David

This was beautiful!
I really liked the last line, I thought it was very sweet and had great impact.
Wonderful work.

This poem is cute
"I love the way you protect me when life is so unfair"
If I'd find a guy that does that, I would be in heaven!
5/5 well done xox