Comments : A Dog Sits Waiting

  • 17 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    It's rare these days that a poem can bring me to tears, so congratulations on that one. I guess I'm a softy for animals, but that was one sad poem.
    You have a couple of spelling mistakes though. On the first line of the third couplet, it should be "can't," and on the second line of the fourth couplet is should be "he."
    Keep writing.