Wow great job, liked the way you didnt go about all this in real sad way but still got your point across good job keep up the good work

Actully this was a great poem, really well written.......welcome back to the site as you have a great talent to share and inspire us, i will be back to check out more of great works and a 5/5 from me as you really deserve it.

This is a good poem! i like it! keep up the good work!

The first stanza totally got me hooked. great work, the rest of the poem was excellent too. nice word choice and emotion.

5/5 David

I think it was a great poem and the rhyme scheme was really good too = ] 5/5

Your repetition of "It's funny" worked really well in this, however it did get a little annoying towards the end - I will admit. The rhyme scheme you chose was very effective and it worked nicely. The flow was smooth and your word choice was simple but good.

"How I miss you so much
I never thought I'd feel this way
That parting would hurt so much"
- I don't like how you repeated "much". It threw me off a bit. But overall, you did an amazing job. (: 5/5

Take care,
Stephanie

I liked it alot, many people can relate to broken friendships. Good job, 5/5. Em x