That was a very good poem. Well writen for sure. Seemed like not exactly a good look on the world but ohh soo very truthful.

I'll give that a 5/5 nice work.

Dean.-xo.

This was a very good write. Though, I'm pretty sure Sonnets have a particular rhyme scheme and structure to follow (depending on the type of sonnet). But this was a truly amazing poem, regardless. I enjoyed reading it. Keep writing! 5/5

-` Liz