This was very well written. The emotion and feeling really helped the reader experience a little of your pain. Brilliant job.

WOW, real deep stuff. the emotion just grabs u. gr8 poem:)

Wow go yingy u still have it in u unlike me nothin 2 inspire me any more well see u around

I like it :]

Very well expressed. you did a really neat job in getting the feeling through to the reader. you could feel the way that this feeling is consuming this person. you just made it easy to explain how hard it was to love some1 so much that you allow them to hurt you over and over. good job very very deep.