Rachel
How very sad. You tell the storys of your paitents in such a wonderful way. Yet so sad. Excellent job!

Wow that was a sitch. I like this poem really deep 5/5

Rachel....this tears me up....reality bites!....how sad....I feel it too! Good job....

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awww.. this is soo sad.. but the poem is good.. the rhyme scheme is a little off.. but still the story was told.. an enjoyable read.. :D

:( This is very sad... Did you just write this, or do you know someone that's really like this? :(

That gave me shivers, it was so sad. are these poems based on patients you have treated, if so, your a very strong yet inspired person. keep it up hun

much love and many kisses,
bex

This brought tears to my eyes it was so sad. beautifully written tho great job dear.

I know how you were feeling when you saw this man. My great grandmother continued calling for her husband, and It was so emotionaly heartbreaking to me. I couldn't do anything for her, except hug her and tell her that everything was going to be ok. So..lovely poem, beautifuly written, and your message is quite powerful.