Comments : Immediate Reactions

  • 13 years ago

    by Ashtin

    Okay. so i really really like it!! its So true too.

  • 13 years ago

    by The lil angel

    Love the poem...lot of emotions i am lovin it...can u comment my new poem called THE OnLY ONE I HAVE...thanx ill cxomment bac

  • 13 years ago

    by The lil angel

    I know i commented this one but this is so true and i knwo how you feel...well comment bac l0l

  • 13 years ago

    by Daniel J

    Aww. That's so sweet.

    I like this poem a lot as I think by the end, the reader thinks to themselves "that sounds familiar!"

    I think the best poetry in the public forum isn't the one which rhymes best, it isn't the one which follows some structural rule, but the one the reader can relate to, like this one.

    Well done!
    And thanks for your kind comments on my poems :p

  • 13 years ago

    by Angel Of Death

    Aww.. I love it! heaps awesome, & its so sweet keep it up!
    you rock! ,
    xx

  • 13 years ago

    by Kelso

    This poem is so great! 5/5 keep it up!
    *Kelsey*

  • 13 years ago

    by The lil angel

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    AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
    AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!

  • 13 years ago

    by The lil angel

    Awwwwwwwwwww he likes u...
    so u have a boyfriend huh...lol anywayz my day today wasnt really that good caz the guy i love doesnt like me anymore...
    he has a new girlfriend... i am sad but hopefull i will get over it.... but i am happy 4 u..

  • 13 years ago

    by Mandy

    CYUTE!! wow its weird cause like all ur poems relate to my luv life!!! i luv it! keep up the good work!

  • 13 years ago

    by La La xx Beth

    Uhmmm amazing. haha i really liked it. congrats on your new bf, lol.

  • 13 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    Wow! So beautiful! 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by 19Rusty

    Lucky I want a mini truck sooo bad.

  • 12 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    Ya I remember all the butterfly feelings and the pins and needles lol It's amazing the way that love can make us feel like the happiest person one minute, and absolutely worthless the next. maybe thats what I love about love lol Great job hun 5/5 GG23

  • 12 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    Aww amazingly cute : 0