This poem was well written, I have to admit.
Although...
It kind of restates its main topic repeatedly.
Other than that.
It was pretty good.
I was hooked when you said.
I will my heart to fail.
That was a strong line for me.
Well done :]
5/5

Lol..wow!..I loved the way you penned this one!...superb!...The choice of words was great and it flowed well too...and had a strong meaning and message through out..the topic was clear!
Well written!

5/5

xxPoojaxx

Hey, Countdown isn't crappy, I love it! =P

Haha, I'm totally kidding, btw.

I liked the realism in this piece. It's not so surreal anymore, it's as if the reader is actually sitting there watching everything you describe happen.

Excellent.

Wow, this poem deserves much more than a 5. I didn't get the title at first, but once I read through it it made much more sense. I loved your use of imagery in this piece as well, everything was explained thoroughly and effectively. Great job. =]

5.5
<3