That is mucho good
i got that feeling you had
right before you cry

amber

This is great too.You are a great writer.I really enjoy reading your work.

Kelsie

Aww it made me cry!!!!
this poem was short yet it was amazing and filled with emotion!!!
great write
5/5
--Jess

I love it and are so glad you gave it to me to keep, your such a great writer Ray, way better than me any day lol
-rach