I liked you peom. but with no disrespect, you should wish to be thst girl because everygirl is beautiful....and i am sure that you are just another beautiful girl!!!

I really liked your poem! 5/5...i think a lot of girls feel that way! great job keep writing cuz ur good!!

Hey,
nice poem, the flow is great and rhyming too =) I will check out some of your other poems..5/5
kisses stephanie

Loads of girls do feel that way
but with the make up try not wearing any people, then see what attention you get cos make-up is every day makes eveyone look the same so just try doin it natural then see the heads turn

Don't we all wish we could be like someone else? I liked this poem also. Your poems have alot of feeling in them and you just seem to fit every word in perfectly like you do in your poems.

5/5

-You made it in my favorites.