Comments : The itsy bitsy razor blade

  • 17 years ago

    by gabriel

    Rhyme to itsy bitsy spider? uh i'm no fan of self-multilations but please do think twice before cutting urself...

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Interesting how you made the poem like the set up of the itsybitsy spider.. clever.. however i couldnt really find the flow.. but the word choice was nice.. so great job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Poetic Justice

    I really liked the poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!