Comments : Who will save me?

  • 17 years ago

    by FallingDownFast

    This is a good poem.. i will catch you if youfall.. lol although youll probs still hit the ground for i've been already taken down! lol hehe.. thanks for the comment!
    This poem is a very good write.. i think that you could get more detal into it with out going over board.. but the flow and rythem is very nice.. and it is very easy to conect with! keep up the splended work! ♥