I really like it...was a little confusing, maybe you should shorn it...4 out of 5

comment some of my peoms too,...

Oh wow.
that is sad.
and really good.
=]

O.G.

Omg that wuzz amazing i wish i could write like u. i wonna get to know u(not like that) maybe we could get each others email and liek talk about poetry and u could help me so i can

Wow. I feel pretty late on reading it but I think its amazing. I definantly give it a 5

Wow...this poem is amazing. you are very talented. i wish i would write as good as you. keep on writing...

comment back if you get a chance...

xoxo leanna xoxo

OMG so much better then mine(in my opinion mine suck)WOW!5/5