Debbie
This is one of the most beautiful poems I have ever read. It is like you poured your heart and soul into it. Excellent job! Love Cindy

Debbie, I love this poem. It flows so easily and perfectly. I'm at a loss for words. Amazing write. 5/5! Love always,

-` Liz

This is a very well done poem, and I am glad that I read it. I am into that stuff about fantasy!

Brilliant wording Debbylyn! I've added you to my favs cause I like your style of writing. 5/5 - Look forward to reading your next one.

Oh.....This is so sadly lovely....I like to believe, though,that they will meet again in another life....under circumstances more conducive for their Love....Eternity is just too long!....
You have a deep and compelling poetic gift...each piece I read has this effect on me......nice ta' meetcha'....;-)

It is a very good piece. It could fit many categories and it could take many different meanings.

This is an amazing way of words I'd believe that you were a pro! amazing!!!!!!!

Oh my, This is such a deep poem and very passionate...In some sort of way.
Its so emotional and shows alot of detail.
great job, I wish I could write like a true poet
such as yourself!!
xoxroxyxox

Congratulations on winning my contest. This poem is perfect. It is now added to my list of favorite poems by you.....the list keeps growing every time you write a new one. I am amazed by your talent. Your poems are flawless.This poem is beautifully penned with impeccable rhythm and rhyme. It tugs at your heart strings. EXCELLENT JOB!!!!

Wow, God I wish I could find the words to say more but I cant I'm shocked...that has to be the best poem I have read since I started writing on the site again. Fantastic. I have to add you to my favs. Well done.

So much description, so much detail. very well written and the ending really proved that this poem was excellent.

5/5 from me! David

Such a dark and mysterious poem. the imagery that you get from this is spooky. well done that means.

5/5 David

Speaks so much to me......
there is no contest in my world

This is beautifully written...The imagery you created in this was breathtakingly done, it created very vivid pictures in my mind. The flow was flawless throughout the whole piece and the depth and emotion you put into this was easily felt. i loved every aspect of this poem, it all came together to create a truly beautiful read.