Hey....we must be sharing thoughts....nicely done.

Rachel
How beautiful and sad. I think there are three of us on this day! Excellent job! Love you!

A very sad poem Rachel. full of emotion, it flowed beautifully.
keep writing
love Tara-Kay

Beautiful. short but holds so much emotion. wonderful job

Welldone5/5 very gr8 wrk take care. ur all poem was good

That was really very beautiful.
I really liked it.

COMMENT #1 (congratulations on winning first place in my triolet poetry contest!)

wonderful job here... the flow is flawless and the rhymes are great.. and the word choice is outstanding.. really great job!

Wow. That's about the best way to put it. wonderfully done

I like it. I know my own angel whose problems are too. It all a matter of time, she will get through.

-smiles- This is such a great poem..very sad but yet its so descriptive it would make anyone want to read further on!!
xoxroxyxox

That was one of the better poems I've read on this site. It was flawless when it came to rhythm, and the emotion was also quite apparent. Great write, keep up the great work.

I love ur poem u put a lot of emotions and it makes u feel like u want to cry...good job i gave u a 5/5 ......keep up the good work.....

ur friend,

Angel

Wow..i dont know if to feel sad or amazed..its a very beautiful peace of work, ...keep it up...im cheerin 4 u =)

Awwwwwwwwwwwww, wat a great poem... this is the best poem tht i red today.. take care

NICE WRITE. I ENJOY ANYTHING WITH ANGELS. 5/5

Awww. wot a sad story, so nicely written though. well done

much love and many kisses,
bex

Kinda has some meaning that I can relate too......
beautifully worded poem of being alone looking for that special one.
that just alludes her love call......