I like it

Man thats good. i write songs too and i like the feeling
if you wanna check out some of my stuff and give me some tips thatd be great
thanks

Amazing.. like all of ur work.. u definately have more talent than alot of the ppl who write. u r one of my favorites. i always chek to see if u have a new poem in. keep on writing.. i will always keep reading
take care
luve angie

Wow...this is amazing. you had beautiful imagery and diction...I viewed this as almost a music video. like images going through my head with someone saying these words in the background. great job.

keep it uppp