Comments : You Were My First Love (And are going to be my last)

  • 18 years ago

    by craig

    Wow i think this poems really amazing iv felt the same and its good too know someone else has felt the same hope your not going too crazy over her like me, its not healthy, but you cant stop your mind hey

  • 18 years ago

    by xoxShorteexox

    Hey Brent,
    It's been a while since I commented or voted on your poems, so I decided I should do that now.
    These lines: "But it's over now and to late to turn back
    And I'm sorry about all this I know I can be a nag"

    It should be too late to. You just missed an o, it's a grammar thing.

    This poem was really amazing other than that. I really liked the emotion and everything. Keep up the good work. =]

    -Heather