Wow. Beautiful. Very long, but at least it has a lot of meaning. Nicely done. :]

Your writing remains a favourite of mine. Incredible description and ability to share emotion and imagery. I always enjoy a pleasant wander through your verses.

So, is man god, or something less than an envisaged god? Transcend or accept, there is nothing to dissapoint - the only answer or path one takes, innately, is the one that one willingly accepts and more importantly, can live with. Enjoyable existential theme ;) c.

WOW that was an excellent poem , wonderfully written and wording was fantastic , a pleasure to read and very touching, my favorite lines :
So catch me, God or Man, and my life will
fall,
aching and willing
into your strong hands. you did a super job on this one,,, keep it up ,, your friend Tracy d 5/5