Oh very clever. this was perfectly written, both of you.

5/5 David

Excellent Rachel! Daughter so like her Mother. Wonderful minds and wonderful hearts. I love you both! 5/5

Rachel, so good to work with you...you are multi- talented...I'm so proud of you! I love you.

Wow. i loved the wording. it was excellent

much love and many kisses,
bex

Wow this was an excellent poem this is beautifully written.

Ok hang on... *breathe* - I just realised I was holding my breath for the entire time I was reading that poem!! Haha - and sitting with my eyes about 2 inches from the screen.

Good job - very sad tho. Oh I hate cancer - it is just like the monster that you describe.

Very good write rachel. 5/5 from me

A wonderfully penned collab!

It grips my heart and hits it with such extreme impact.
Thank you for sharing this wonderful read from two truly gifted poets.

I've already commented on Debbylyn's and i'll probably end up repeating myself, lol.
But quite seriously, the whole detail of this poem was amazing. It really was. You both really managed to get into the mind of the reader with these words..
Very well done to the both of you! Excellent collab!
5/5
*Gem*

Who was the collab with? cindy? random guy next door? who?

the poem was well done. i must admit that.

David